BEAUTIFUL CREEP's no creme de la creme

Bonjour, Mlle Denton,

Many thanks for your recent submission, Beautiful Creep, for considering by TQR.

Good title. I like it.

The piece itself, the Monkey says a resounding 'non! ' and I have to agree. There's a spark, but not a hit. Odd friendship. Misunderstood character. Anti-heroism...and the title....these are the skeletal aspects that exist for you to develop. Do it. Then see what happens.

Merci et bientot!

G. DePlancher The Floor TQR

Sent while levitating from my own Bright Cloud.