Boligard pisses upon INTRUSION's pre-ordained inclusion

Hello Gary,

Examined your cap a few times, found it well crafted but lacking in power. And by lacking in power, I mean the prose was limp. Nonresponsive. We're looking for something that explodes in your hands. Or your face. But you're great, as your cover letter lets us know, and so you shall rise, sirah.

Keep it unreal,

Boligard Doomey the Floor www.tqrstories.com